Black Poetry : Dear Santa Pt. II (Returned to sender)

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  1. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DDAANNNNNNNNG Gurlfriend

    to fierce , busting the propoganda wide open . The myths of the white man perpertrated for so long , that we can't distinguish fiction from fact !
    Pt 1 was heart achingly sweet
    Pt : brought forth the reality
    go head on sistah
     
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    tell the truth

    and folks can call me Mrs. Scrooge if they want to.....
    I love the way you brought this important chunk of reality!

    Thank you.

    a
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sho ya right

    and surely i want be in a red suit
    but i will feed 10 families and gift
    5 more this year not much but a
    start ........just doing my part!:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WELL , UNDERSTOOD

    YA EMOTIONAL STATEMENT IS WELL FELT TOO
     
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    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Zorb

    Part1...nearly made me cry because you have so truly stated the logic and heart of a little person...they see things so clearly..and are affected so deeply by them...

    Part 2...made me mad, to think that this is the way people think..to ignore the real problem and sugar-coat it, hoping it will all go away...

    what the world needs is more people to think as you do...to know that a home-cooked meal or an ear or heart to listen, or a warm place to sleep, means so much more than anything money will ever be able to buy....

    thank you for bringing these words into my day....

    K
     
  7. poeticdelight

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    Dear Santa

    bring us a box of toys
    heart-filled laughter and
    a top full of joy

    the little girls and boys
    are waiting for the toys

    ~peace and love~
     
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    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my...

    sentiments exackly!

    really enjoyed the read.
    got caught up in that one.

    keep spittin' poet.
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Too True!

    Bring it out Shun! I dig the way you think...

    Madd Love
    Reas
     
  10. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Exactly!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! U, queen you been reading that "Revolutionary Suicide" haven't you? Capitalism is a trip ain't it. That's why I celebrate the principles of Kwaanza.

    you have hit the nail on the head again.

    blak
     
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