Black Poetry : Dear Potatoe Chip

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by CindyC, Mar 18, 2015.

  1. CindyC

    CindyC Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You can never have just one
    Whatever makes up
    That combination of junk food goodness
    You can never ever have just one

    Your kisses are potate chips
    I am addicted like that
    Drawn to daily binges
    Only in my dreams

    Oh, and chocolate
    Don't get me started on chocolate
    My word, worse than chips
    My soul's cravings

    Your hugs are chocolate
    Who can get enough chocolate
    Rich and smooth
    I want to be swimming in chocolate

    Then there is ice cream
    Surprisingly chilling
    Melts in your mouth
    In a hundred different flavors

    Your laughter is ice cream
    It chills the world around
    Melts in my heart
    Makes me laugh along with you

    Potatoe chips, chocolate, ice cream
    I am a junk food junkie
    Totally addicted, can't get enough of you
    Just sayin' you are the food for my soul
     
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    Harry Hyman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    CindyC - Potato chips, chocolate and ice cream with a hundred flavors. Um! Um! Um! I think I got a cavity reading this and yet I don't even want a cure, especially with saliva running down the side of my chin and I can't find my Holiday Inn towel anywhere. LOL. This was a delicious rendering of those edible 'loved things' we consume and of that special 'loved one' no less edible and no less consumeable. Much enjoyed the craft and intent of your poetic words CC. HH
    P.S. - I can see chips on my kitchen table. Bet I can't eat just one!
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    to he whose cravings are deepest, dig in.

    enjoyed the feast.
     
  4. CindyC

    CindyC Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, thank you!
    It has been years since I stopped writing and posting on Destee. This as a nice welcome home! Good to see old faces and new!
    It always brings me a smile when someone relates to my words!
    Much love to you...thank you again!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    chip o' hoy ! the treat of combo's mixing , the flavor is grand that give me a rush so sweet
    one I love dipping in that make you say ooooweee!! keep it coming CindyC
     
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