Black Poetry : Dear My Love:

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PrincessFlowz, Nov 6, 2003.

  1. PrincessFlowz

    PrincessFlowz Active Member MEMBER

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    Dear my love:
    it saddens me to say
    that being with you
    only makes me shake with fear
    afraid of losing you
    afraid of being with you
    I can't help but imagine
    you caressing someone else
    trailing your chocolate fingers
    down the small of her back
    kissing her sensitive spot and
    making her shiver with pleasure
    the thought gives me goosebumps
    and my hair stands on end
    i must say that i love you
    but do you feel the same?
    i listen to you say those words
    but
    my fear wont let me hear them
    this is to you my love:
    you're so far away when
    i need you here the most
    It tears my heart to say;
    that being with you.....
    is slowly breaking me down
    i am terrified of losing you
    but it's killing me to stay.
     
  2. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    omg

    i can totally feel u on this! i went thru this like 5 months ago, man... im lovin this. youll realize whats best for u sooner than later, trust. nice flow...
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very well posed...
    nice flow
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    flow on poet:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    heart warming feelin ya beat here
    flowhead on now !!!
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I remember when I had a love like this. I am feelin this tight flow, Princess.
     
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    Hey:wave:
    I agree this is
    indeed a beautiful
    flow
    Peace
     
  8. PrincessFlowz

    PrincessFlowz Active Member MEMBER

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    Thanx everyone for your support :)
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We all have felt this at some point in time
     
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