Black Poetry : Dear Moon

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  1. sweet apple*pie

    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dear Moon

    You are but an Illuminating light

    Which cast forth shadows against my bedroom walls

    I can hear you calling me….

    To come closer

    And gaze upon your solemn face of wonders…

    For many mysteries you carry

    You capture the radiance of me

    And causes the tides of my heart to rise and fall

    Crashing softly against my crystalline shore

    Of white sands, corral reefs, and the shells of life

    Only to take a part of me

    That which is my heart, a sandy beach

    Back into the sea

    Never to be seen again

    Dear Moon



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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Upon da moon
    look to da starz of everglaze
    forth where da moon divided
    self into it's slumber
    the cyrstalizing sparkles
    within each star holds
    a piece of ya heart
    connect them and bring
    ya heart back home
    for there only lay
    ya moon answer

    I can feel u deeply here
    only you can rebuild what's been taken
    for it's not gone just hidden deep with thee
    search u shall fine .
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes....rebuild I will, for I feel wonderfully calm

    However the moon is responsible for all the tidal waves of emotions that crash upon me

    gentle some days, some days tsunamis...


    thank you for the encouraging flowback...
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    beautiful

    like i said before your spirit is pure

    don't beat yourself up

    it's not you

    it's this "place"

    your work touched my core

    AGAIN!
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A very Peaceful Flow...Facilitating a great emotion of Serenity. Great Peice poet...Flow On
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you, sweet so'ja
    :hearts4:

    Thank you for feeling me Platinum. Yes, I feel at peace with flow. thank you! :hearts4:
     
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