Black Poetry : Dear Mister,

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dear Mister,
    Lets go the lonnnng way around….
    Love taste so dayum sweet….
    Naïve
    Because one day you change…
    You turn your back on me
    The one I open up to…
    I pack my things and just
    Walkout the door….
    It hurts me inside…
    But one day you changed
    The love wasn’t sweet anymore…
    Don’t really want to go
    But I had to….
    Cant handle the change….
    So much love don’t know
    Where it went…just pain
    See, I had to turn
    The drugs took you from me
    I cant deal as much as I tried…
    You started lyin.
    .then it was the baby
    That wasn’t mine….
    Don’t forget the hand
    raisen and shoutin
    The cruel way you choose
    to do me
    I was there when your best
    friend couldn’t and your
    momma wouldnt....
    yes I support your dayum habit…
    naïve oooo was me….
    The week you did in jail I waited
    Then don’t forget the 30 days
    I did it all alone…..
    But bills got paid….
    This when I knew I could do it alone
    I stood right there….naïve was me…
    And then you say you love me….
    I cant take the change…
    Yet you sit here and beg me to stay
    That you will change…
    Funny because you already have….


    I was this woman that never thought
    you could do nothing wrong…..
    Until you start doing it to me….
    See I am a woman…a Black Princess
    A Queen I am
    I have pick up my head and moved on:toast:

    Love you always more
    liza

    a blkangel thang.....
     
  2. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Really like this. Nice flow.
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you....
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a really good flow...i like it alot...
     
  5. Jazz4u

    Jazz4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm sitting here listening to ashanti "rain on me"....and this fits my mood...nice flow much respect j.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i feel u and felt the emotions rockin in da wind
    very nice flow indeed
     
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    suddenpassion Banned MEMBER

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    nice flow, sis keep it up, i felt this.
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you guys wasnt sure how this would go off...
    thanks for reading and replin
     
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