Black Poetry : Dear Hati

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  1. heartofantiger

    heartofantiger Member MEMBER

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    Tonight I dedicate
    To no one else but you
    I will not go out and celebrate
    A freedom that is past overdue
    Let my friends be upset
    Because I drown in solitude at home
    I will not break a dance or a sweat
    For my feelings have become numb

    Tonight I dedicate
    To the one that makes my heart sing
    It is your special day
    And happiness I wish I could bring
    Before I got to know you
    There was already a connection
    I have fallen in love with you
    Because in you I find my reflection

    Tonight I dedicate
    To you my only love
    My love for you is so great
    It is something undreamed of
    I wish we could be together
    I want to be with you everyday
    I wish I could protect you
    And take all your troubles away

    Tonight
    To you I dedicate
    It feels so right
    Your happiness I await
    Since the first day we truly met
    I fell in love with your language
    I couldn’t believe how I felt
    As I found your beauty in every page

    Every word out of your mouth
    Like the gospel I adore
    Everywhere from north to south
    I see a beauty I can’t ignore
    Your moves
    So powerful they take me back in time
    As I groove
    With those who have long died

    The more I get to know you
    The more I understand you
    The more I am connected with you
    The more I feel the pain with you
    The more I fall in love with you
    The more I wanna be with you
    The more I wanna defend you
    The more I wanna rescue you

    Tonight
    To you I dedicate
    Let the candles light
    My love for you I celebrate
    And the souls that have burnt
    For a cause that seems lost
    Let the incense burn
    For those who fought without exhaust


    Tonight
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ya pen flowing in high gear
    tyte drop poeticlly !!!!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice vibe smooth likes
    thanks for sharing
     
  4. heartofantiger

    heartofantiger Member MEMBER

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    Many thanks I give to the two of you.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    much love and peace to you
    this flow is a wonderful testament
    to the roots of your soil
    indeed your poem is
    filled with love :luvv:

    Blue
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Dear Hati" is a wonderful lesson in love, I enjoyed it!
     
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    re: Dear

    VERy deep poem.
     
  8. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is beautiful, pure, poetic expression. Really enjoyed it.
     
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    ...poet

    this was breathtaking

    Nicely done...
    Sage
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    l was hearing music to this one....

    very nice,,
    jh.
     
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