Black Poetry : Dear God...don't let me die

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  1. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    such a beautiful expression of fayth...i know he hears this..don't worry he is faithful to answer...
    :heart:
    -story

    P.S (the lower the lows, the higher the highs...and please remember that no storm last forever...whatever u'r going through, will pass....take refuge in the Lord, and he will be your strenght....luv ya sis...and i hope that whatever ailes u will past soon...i'll be praying for u...)
     
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    My heart felt like sobbing with this, these incredibly dark and painful words. Sister, being cast down for a time, I know it is impossible to get up without God's helping hand. And he will raise you up, he probably already is, how else could you have the strength to bless us with these vivid images, how ever sadly they are portrayed.
     
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    heartfelt scribe...very well posed scribe....
    keep the faith..continue on love the scibe
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    angelicsage

    This is a very nice poem. I know some people who are feeling this way at the moment. Bad economy...bad relationships....unsuccessful attempts to make things happen for them in their lives. This poem would represent the depression that they are now in...and how they feel about it.

    :thanks: for sharing a part of you with us.

    :toast:
     
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    Ah, my beautiful and talented sister, you even make pain and trepidation flow with grace and ease. This is a great piece of art. May your faith never abate and your prayers be never-ending, for they will be answered. Much love and peace, angelicsage. :grouphug:
     
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    angel..............


    i just readed youre poem....


    this morning i woke up ....crying (with heavy physical pains)


    you just described a feeling i had this morning..
    and put it down emotionaly and heartfelt ...
    write on siste..

    i took the book book of life and opend it there it was....
    the words
    ""gods saves you from every emergancy ""'

    its harder to believe than to read ...

    but its treu....


    I hear ya...


    most inportant ..


    He hears you......


    (though i doubt at times)




    Much much love and strength to you Sweet..
    and whoever goes through this..








    Love Libertylady :heart:
     
  8. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and i have to ad,,,,,


    no one knows when we go...


    even when youre sick...(physical)

    the best thing to do is.....


    as hard as it is at times is to enjoy the little things in life..

    and take in all the love you get...

    even if you expectet the love of some people and they dont give it to you...dont focus on that...
    take in the love anyone gives to you.....

    and remember always.....

    God makes mirracles...

    and also remember that some suffer and depression..for the purpose of christ....
    but the revelation of his delithness will be more worthed ,,,,

    like eternal life ....







    Lovelibertylady:heart:
     
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    dear sister you have my love and respect i feel you deeply in this drop, i hear the cry out and this flow has deeply touch me,,,much love to you dear sister, very powerful flow
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    Sgae,
    oh my goodness girl, you made me cry....no joke... Poetry on this site has my emotions on my sleeve.

    God can ....through all things

    Just remember that. he can wip away your tears.

    :heart: SwtT
     
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