Black Poetry : Dear Daddy

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  1. URGelus

    URGelus Active Member MEMBER

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    Dear Daddy,

    As I look back on the time that went too quickly,
    It seems like just yesterday you were here with me.
    I can’t believe a year has passed since you were taken away.
    My life will never be the same; I lost my best friend that day.
    I will never again hear you tell a joke that’s only funny to you,
    Or sing some silly song only you know the words to.
    Not a day goes by that, for you, I don’t shed a tear.
    The only thing that keeps me going is knowing that you’re near.
    Although I can’t see you or touch you, I still know you are there.
    No one will ever understand that special bond that we share.
    I know in my heart that one day I will see you again,
    But, until then, I love you and I miss you.
    Love always,
    Your daughter and best friend.
     
  2. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awww......that's was so sweet. I loved it. Nice flow gurl.

    Much luv,
    foxy......
     
  3. Nia Maishani

    Nia Maishani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow.

    Now that was touching. Very touching. Deeply felt.

    Respect & :heart:,

    Nia
     
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    this was very touching...
    made me think and appreciate
    the many aspects of my relationship
    with my father...

    this was felt!
     
  5. Jazz4u

    Jazz4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was really nice...kind of reminded me of my off beat dad who would burst into the room yelling he is superman (thankfully minus the tights) posing and everything... i lmao everytime he does it...much love j.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well felt and from ya heart it was well said
    i feel u , when one so dear is gone very deep flow
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    enjoyed this flow...
    nice read
     
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