Black Poetry : Dear Daddy

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  1. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (I misscarried my son and his father wasn't there. When I told him he thought I was lying the whole time about being pregnant. Even though I was showing. (Laughs) The story behind the words)



    Where's my daddy? Doesn't he care?
    When the angels came, he wasn't there
    Mommy's hurting, the tears won't stop
    All cause daddy had another feel to cop
    Yells at mommy and denies me to this day
    And now when she needs him most, he only stays away
    My daddy can feel me watching over him though.
    And even if in his head he doubts, in his heart the truth he knows
    She would never hurt him in that scandelous way
    Cause she knows in his heart she would no longer stay.
    Daddy why don't you see my mommy cry?
    And why don't you know the reason why?
    Cause all in one night she had to watch my soul fly
    And kiss the love of her life goodbye
    Now mommy's giving up on her own life
    Cause the harsh reality hits...She's no longer the "wife"
    I see you both down there hurting so bad
    I want you to know that you're making God kinda mad
    You see you both are weak and wating to die
    But you're wings aren't ready. God won't let you fly
    So daddy please be there for mommy, she's there for you
    I can see what you can't...Mommy's love is tru
    As long as you're there she'll never give up
    Cause just your presence seems to be enough
    God brought me home cause he knew yall weren't ready yet
    So go look in mommy's eyes and you'll see something you'll never forget
    Look deep and hard, you'll see ME looking back at you
    Then hold my mommy close, do what I CANT do!

    Love,

    LIL shaun
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sadly sad spoken wordz that is felt deep in my heart
    momma's love daddy lost hope
    this feelin is no joke i feel u so deeply
    sorry to hear such lost of a wonderful gift .......
    this hurts when i feel a vibe so deep when bruthas
    continue to be in a myth of reality.....

    very well expressed .........let the feelins flow............
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome Poet,

    This is profound, teaching us the importance of love. Well-done!

    She would never hurt him in that scandelous way
    Cause she knows in his heart she would no longer stay

    -Alizentang
     
  4. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks $$RICH$$. This was a poem that I hold very dear to my :heart: Wish that I would've gotten more feedback on this one right here.

    1poetsought: Thanks for stopping by to read me. I'm glad you like!
     
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    Alize, I am sorry for the loss of your unborn child.... Keep your head up and you are in my prayers. good low though
     
  6. NINI69

    NINI69 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BABYGIRL,

    LOVE IS ALL THINGS HOLD ON FOR THE HEALING IT BRINGS

    MY HEART GOES OUT TO YOU. WELCOME TO THE FAM!

    PEACE!
     
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    Hey Alizentang ...so sad for your lost my sister..your flow is deep...our prays are with you..thanks for bringing it back to the front page ..much love
    Peace
     
  8. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks SwtT...you are a sweetheart.

    Hi NINI69...Good to see a new face on my pages. Thanks for the feedback stop by my pages again soon

    Bluewater...Your words are always so sweet

    Thanks to everyone else who stopped by to view me. Much love to the family :grouphug:
     
  9. MORE

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    this was a magnificent piece, again i choked back tears.....so visual and realll......no words....:toast: :toast: :toast: :toast: :toast:
     
  10. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks MORE I'm glad that you liked
     
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