Black Poetry : Deal

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Inque, Sep 16, 2005.

  1. Inque

    Inque Active Member MEMBER

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    Some things I’ll just never be,
    Like a man.

    Take it like a man,
    You say,
    Take it like a man.

    Fight like man

    Stand up,
    Be a man.

    Say just deal with that burden,
    Say take it like a man.

    Well I tell you what…

    I take it like a woman,
    And my burden is man.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling you here ...whoa the impact it can be .
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poet, this was a bullseye!! I heard that. Kudos for that direct hit.
     
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    Well I tell you what…

    I take it like a woman,
    And my burden is man


    wow...this was on point...i feel u here sistah...i love how this poem flowed...kinda lit up at the end...dayum...

    keep the flow goin...

    Mz.Soull aka prizefighter :rain:
     
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