Black Poetry : Deal With This

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MADDRAPPER, Nov 15, 2002.

  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Deal With This

    Describe in general terms on how to survive
    While criminal can get burned in a daily strive
    Guilty and convicted filthy and restricted to a jail cell
    Can’t prevail well locked up not to mention detention is hell
    Just to dodge trouble is a large struggle many have fell //
    Gin and juice what? It’s hard to fight temptation
    Battle with taste buds produce a strange sensation
    Of wetness drunk trying to rearrange my own damnation
    Silk is fine drink milk for my mind it add calcium to my bones
    In many cases add potassium to domes
    Decided to teach cats in order to reach their stats
    With fact and data attack this matter while wearing beach hats
    Live without interruption and give instruction on how
    To progress in this rap production and earn chow
    In this mess // could have a trick situation without fixed
    Compensation, mixed conversation could be confusing like a Twix
    With the boss may cost you a job then become a false slob?
    And jerk without work be more alert toss opinions get involve
    Pouting could hatch into a shouting match with the supervisor
    Could lose calories from salaries have pay check allergies be wiser
    Can’t play with your payday money look funny like coffee with no cream //
    Desires and motivation could set fires of devastation seen
    Empires die on location to stay afloat requires education extreme

    MADDRAPPER PEACE
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nice twist of MADDNESS !
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ THANKS FOR RESPONDING
     
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    man u know i'm all into yo flow
    they better wake up!!
     
  5. Gaylee

    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really like the message here and even think I got it this.
    Great RAP, Great RHYME, Great RYTHM and RITE ON TIME.
     
  6. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Another Fly Joint!

    You know this ...
    ...
    and anotha one...
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gaylee AND Desert Storm thanks for responding to this for real yo really enjoyed it
     
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