Quiet Poetry Lounge : Deal With It

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SensualReality, Apr 9, 2004.

  1. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Somebody teach me how to cope with these feelings so i won't sit around and hope.
    Maybe we could've seen eye to eye,but there was no we.it was you and I.
    Shoulda,coulda,woulda started something beautifully right.
    Didn't realize it til' I found myself blinded by sight.
    Mixed up like cherries and peaches in a plastic bowl.
    Coulda mixed our feelings together like water and oil,be different yet still whole.
    I was afraid of being too attatched to you like a lock on the refrigerator.
    Might not have started right,but it was our fault for not popping the hood and not checking the radiator.
    Now the heats turned up and well,**** feels rough!
    Oh well though life isn't always good it's filled with misery and strife.
    Guess you didn't know how to deal either.
    That's why you cut me like a string out of your life.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely posed
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes folks just wash their hands of situations, and other people, keep flowing with those feelings.
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    will do thank you I always try to give a second chance....
     
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    sometime the second tyme is a charm
     
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