Black Poetry : Deadly,IT

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  1. $ms>GET IT

    $ms>GET IT Active Member MEMBER

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    This plant was dead, with no life to live It had no hope, with no dream's to strive it had lost It's rope,

    DEADLY

    It last past owner had lost his mind, he'd abused It, confused It,afraid next owner may come and snatch It because It was fine,

    DEADLY

    So he tried hard to break It down, causing It leaf's to break,making It's emotions fake,toward's him along with the world.Does'nt this sound's like a lost little girl?

    DEADLY

    It cried and plead to saved, drowned In tears, covered In fear's as though It was a roach covered In raid,Similar to the poor having It made.

    DEADLY

    It had leaned but not fallen, damaged but still growing,little did the owner know I'ts knowledge over flowing.

    DEADLY

    It knew what It felt like not to be cared for.So It's heart grew a lock and closed It upon a door.She gave up on the owner didnt want him any more.OH yeah The PLANT WAS JUST A vision,but reality a girl waiting now for the right man to come and bring her the world.

    DEADLY
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deadly maze of destruction speak on !
     
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    Thanks for all the love u show it keeps people like me writting.
     
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    Keep writing Ms Get It that was a nice poem.
     
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