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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by hadassah, May 31, 2001.

  1. hadassah

    hadassah Active Member MEMBER

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    she thought that every head-board bangin,
    paint-peelin, back-breakin session on the
    box springs would make him love her more

    he could never wait to unzip and slip
    between her thighs...
    they hit the sheets befo the clothes
    hit the flo good...

    she thought that givin him every part
    of her would guarantee the heart of him
    and happily slammin ever after would be
    the lovely tale of them

    he thought she knew she was the best
    to cum to his rescue when he needed to
    do tha do...

    her juicy lips and wide ***; he liked her
    attitude and she never said no, no matter
    the mood....

    he thought that hammer-slingin and ding-
    dong-WRINGIN was enough to keep his
    manhood singin,

    even if he found a wife,
    he'd keep swingin her way
    (cuz when thangs got tight, she was
    open at all times of the day)

    and after the orgasms and body spasms
    erupted from deep inside her chasm

    and after the glow and the flow of the
    mo she'd lay there watchin him gettin rett to go

    wonderin what she could do betta the next
    time they boned

    while he took a towel, wiped his *ick off
    and got the **** on

    h
     
  2. belahni

    belahni Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I've read this

    a few times hadassah; and it the truth STILL hurts. Brothas and sistas have to learn it's not all about the bootay.

    **** this is good!

    b
     
  3. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a strong piece.
    sad to see how some can be so blind
    and some can be so selfish
    and seein the same thing
    different.
    thank you.
    -7 :spinstar:
     
  4. cojamalik

    cojamalik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I respect the honesty. More of it needed1
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    unfortunely i've been in her position...several times. but you live and you learn
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa...those words were just slammed on the page. But it's the truth...wow.
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sad but tru. when will some people learn??.fortunately, i havent been there. this was def. a tyte scribe.much love :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very on point and well felt the reality of a sad tale
    flow on
     
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