Black Poetry : Dead man writing (pt.1)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by twision, Jan 18, 2006.

  1. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I married life
    Then divorced it
    My words suffered
    Became corpses
    Now I'm left with two choices
    Rebirth or rigor mortis.....

    Words inside
    Beg for release
    While my mind
    Begs for relief
    Intellectually I bleed
    And timidly I speak

    Inspiration
    No longer nigh
    She left me, I cried
    Began to wither up inside
    Knowing without her
    I'd die

    Battered words
    Abuse my ears
    Tainting thoughts, birthing fears
    Stealing days, taking years
    Taking smiles
    Leaving tears

    Insecurities
    Caged me in
    I committed self- destructive sins
    But found redemption with a pen
    Wrote in blood
    Twision live again!

    ......to be continued
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome back !!!!! Twision
    indeed let thy pen release all
    from tears to pain from sin
    yep u back again friend .........
     
  3. nevar

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    oh my this was some write twision
    surely i see a pure vision
    and it says
    you got the gift
    flow on poet.:kiss1:
     
  4. cursed heart

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    That was tight brother! Real nice:kiss1:
     
  5. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was madd hott
    Yes welcome back indeed poet
    I love that for real
     
  6. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the twin here feels you, 100%.
    " now l'm left with two choices
    rebirth or rigor mortis "
     
  7. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich- It's good to be back!!!!!!!


    Nevar- Appreciate your kindness. It's good to be gifted.(I know you know...I've been watching you.)


    Cursed heart- Thanks for the love. I like your style!

    Tantrum-Glad you feel me bruh. I feel you as well. You always got some good stuff on the board

    j'hiah- It always feels good when the student impresses the teacher!!!!!!!
     
  8. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    With writing like this, I want to read more, this was tight with a capital T. You go poet!
     
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