Black Poetry : Dazed thoughts of you

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ladybug, Jan 31, 2003.

  1. ladybug

    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are the odd ball, the wild card,
    the impulsiveness that I need.
    You are the sound, the sight
    the very substance that sets me free.

    You open “me” up and liberate my mind,
    like a beautiful melody in a harmonious rhyme.
    You envelope my essence and embrace my heart,
    like a spirit uplifted through natures spark.

    You are the one I want to grow with,
    And unravel in friendship
    You are the one with the “potential”
    To cultivate that “growth” into everlastingly …

    By your side as your confidant,
    I will stand.
    With you through love and war
    I will fight ….fight?
    No I will surrender to your endearing love
    If only you would make that “challenge” known
    To love or to …..
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To Love!

    TO Love...yes to love...that's it, that's love poetry....romance and a hint of mystery...not to much detail, more imagery and sentiment, just enough to make you ask the question or answer it out loud for yourself!

    Blessings On Your House!
     
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    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You open “me

    thats nice
    not the best line in the poem but it grabed me ....
    keep it up
     
  4. ladybug

    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you for all the love...it has been awhile but everytime i come on and see all the wonderful inspiration on here i can't help but to share as well, glad to see "it" is still a fam type atmosphere around here....thanks again!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i'm into it ......very sweet flow
     
  6. ladybug

    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    uhhh kemestry what is it that you think you see...lol...but thanks
     
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    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ladybug...

    a lovely peace which describes the "whole" connection between two people....what every heart desires...

    K
     
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    I'm loving this flow!!!
     
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    I loved the flow as well. Great poem.
     
  10. ladybug

    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice site blue, i live in the atlanta area as well, thanks for the love!
     
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