Black Poetry : Dayz

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  1. fade

    fade Member MEMBER

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    “DAYZ”



    DAY: 1 – U SAID U LOVE ME

    DAY: 2 – U SAID I’LL NEVER LEAVE U

    DAY: 3 – U SAID YOU’RE ALL I EVER NEED

    SO WHY ON DAY 4 YOU SAID THAT YOU ARE ABOUT TO LEAVE ME?

    DAY: 5 – I CRIED

    DAY: 6 – I CRIED

    DAY: 7 – I TRIED TO WANDER WHY THE HELL U WAS LYING WHEN ON

    DAY: 1 – U SAID U LOVE ME, DAY: 2 – U SAID THAT YOU’LL NEVER LEAVE ME AND ON DAY: 3 – U SAID THAT YOU’LL ALL I EVER NEED?

    SO WHY IN THE HELL DID U LEAVE ME?

    DADDY SAID THAT THERE WILL BE DAYZ LIKE THIS.
    DAYZ U WILL CRY, DAYZ U WILL LAUGH, DAYZ U WILL ALWAYS WONDERS WHY.

    DAYZ, DAYZ, DAYZ

    I WILL BE SO GLAD WHEN THIS KIND OF DAYZ FADES…………..
     
  2. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes i hear ya sis....




    they will.......








    but they will come back again....







    im sorry.....






    but enjoy when they have fade....








    In sion ......not those day,s..







    Lovelibertylady:heart:
     
  3. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don't worry those dayz will always come and go...keep ya head up ma
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The structure of this piece was very creative, only added to the flow. This was smooth.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    some how i think we need them dayz to get to better ones....very nice flow

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    Scribe on......sometimes I wish days like this would never repeat themselves...But at least the more we go through them, the better we will learn how to live through them for when they come back again. :uhoh:
     
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