Black Poetry : ****, ****, DAYUM!!!

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  1. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    6:00pm sittin' with the laptop
    world stopped
    waiting patiently
    dyme piece 'bout to drop
    LOVE was the topic
    well it still is
    just frustrated
    laid down some feelings
    took time to vent
    clicked submit
    lost my ****
    to this day
    don't know where it went
    ****... it's my fault
    for leaving the subject line blank
    **** it's my fault
    for not scribing in ink
    **** what do i do
    can i do
    should i do
    i think i'll title the joynt
    "LOVE...round 2"

    Love&Respect!!!

    ~DatKatDeyOftenDislikeButNevahEvahDismiss~
     
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    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SMOOVE !!

    SMOOVE..PRECISE...ORIGINAL...LIKE DIS SHHH
    CLEEEEEAN !!!

    ONE !

    On A Continuous Journey
    GYPSYMAN
     
  3. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MAN MAN MAN

    GYPSYMAN--almost lost my mind when i lost that joynt, but i'll bring it back mo' live than the first time...just gotta feel it again.

    DymePlaya

    ~LoveIsNeverUnderatedandAlwaysAppreciated~
     
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    ooohhhh wow !!
    i like this one too !!!

    dayum dayum dayum !!!

    find that peace !!!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  5. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    playa imma send you a pad and pen rhet now cause i too on occasion have had to let out a couple of damns and a few dizayums masef.
     
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    Ha ha ha ha

    Very original love yo flava,lovin it feelin it breathin it in you are so true.
    Desert Storm
     
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    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SMILE

    ~Destee~ thanks for the love and i'm still lookin' :)

    ~UbZoRbShUn~ until i get that pad i'll be using my arm and had for those moments of unexpected inspiration!

    ~Desert Storm~ thanks, Thanks, THANKS!!! i let it flow and
    stay true to ME!

    Love&Respect!!!
     
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    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thinks I need to invest

    in a notepad myself...used up all the backs and fronts of junk mail I could find!!LOL Don't feel bad, I just realized that I left my computer disk with most of my poetry at the DAMNED library!!! :(

    Ya flow is tight!!:)
     
  9. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AFRIDANCR-- just dropped "LOVE...round 2" and still don't have the hard copy...guess i'll never learn...:)
     
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    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Print it out!!!

    Let me tell you, I did something that almost caused me a heart attack. I didn't realize until after the library had closed that I left my disk with ALL of my poetry on it, in the drive!!!! I had to go through the night and wait until after 1pm the next day to get my disk. I called and by the grace of God, it was still there. :)

    Boy was I panicked!!!
     
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