Quiet Poetry Lounge : Dayum... U Got Dem Legs

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  1. lowkey

    lowkey Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dayum... u got dem legs
    Yo sexy legs are the gateway to the softest spot on earth...
    A spot that I'd like to take a long voyage to..
    Letting my lips kiss and caress yo thick brown thighs...
    At times my eyes just wander all over yo body
    Dayum... you got dem legs
    The way you look in dem jeans, mmmmmmm... yo legs are my focal point
    I can't help but to stare as my thoughts dilate from yo flare..
    Dayum... you got dem legs
    Yo Legs are as smooth as my writing.. inviting and enticing to my imagination
    Which in time will become reality..
    Girl u an abnormality.. a body like yours is a rare find
    Wit dem sexy toned legs.. lookin like u been runnin track & field in da cradle of my mind
    Mmmmm is the only word left in my vocabulary
    You got it all.. working it proud n tall
    I've become entraped in yo essence.. u got me in awe
    Dayum... you got dem legs
    Physically.. but also in a deeper sense
    U got that strong foundation.. da quintessence of what other girls wish to be
    U appear to me as a beauty unparalleled to any competition universal
    But back to yo lower section which is the subject of this poetic lyrical dispersal
    Mmmmmm... u got dem legs
    ****, u got no choice but to be sexy in everyway possible
    Visually yo thighs are an obstacle.. clouding my mind with thoughts of lust & love
    But I remain composed...
    Yo posture fosters images of a queen..
    Waiting fo her king to come produce dat Royal Flush... its ok girl, go ahead and blush
    Mmmmmm... u got dem legs
    So drop dem insecurities n let the genuine purity of my words address..
    Girl, I want u to think of me the next time u go reach fo dat dress
    But in the meantime.. savor my words and never let go of their grasp
    U on a different level.. baby u in a whole nother class
    As for the moral of the story...
    Other girls is walking on pegs
    But dayum girl... mmmmm... u got dem legs :)
     
  2. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    where is she ....sounds like somebody i want to meet too...tight flow brotha lo-key :teach:
     
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    indeed dem kinda legs i need to wrap around me for the long ride !
    tyte drop lowkey !
     
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    I guess it's no secret about ...what part of the chicken you like :laugh: again welcome to the house of "legs"...(Oop's) ...I mean "love" this is a wonderful piece you penned. And here's a toast :toast: to the "A-Frame of you thoughts...thanks for sharing.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yea, Queent, it's obvious that the brotha loves those gams, and long ones at that. First rate scribing here brotha, about those limbs, you were poetically descript.
     
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    lowkey Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u sistas


    u know i love dem legs! lol

    Dark meat is da best meat!
     
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    lol track and field huh brotha lol
    pssst brotha lowkey *whisperin* wipe the drowl papito *giggles*
    I see someone has been smitten by the body of a goddess...mmmmhmmmm :look:
    tell it brotha lol Blak beauty is the best aint it :look:
     
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    wow this poem was very vivid.... as i was reading i started to imagine myself starting at some juicy legs... good write...
     
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    :deal: This was the real deal....LOL :darts:
     
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