Black Poetry : Days of Sleep

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I awoke to this funky beat

    Brushed my teeth

    Got something to eat

    Feeling heat :spank:

    Bounced outta da crib

    Ain't got much time

    Left to live... (hey, hey-hey)

    Being Black :coffee:

    In a whitewashed land

    Yeah, it's me ~

    We're back again

    What you see

    Is your worse dream

    No dead poets' rhyme

    Comes this lean

    A little phat...

    To clog your whack

    I'm up to that when you're

    Flat on your back

    Fast asleep,

    Chillin' our fate

    Days of sleep

    ILL on it's face :mad:

    Sign of The Times

    Said catch some winks

    Living L-A-R-G-E,

    But just don't think :confused:

    Days of sleep,

    For a dying race

    WAKE UP!!! :hammer:

    Fool, it's getting late :idea:



    1poetsought ~ copyright 2003
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this

    nice work poet..
    feelin yo words flow on..
    :angel1:
     
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    lovin tha flow on this poet.....may i?......

    today i woke up
    after havin a bad dream...
    it put me in a mood
    where i started to act mean....
    i thought...
    look whut is goin on with this wack scene...
    makin' me dream about some of tha worst things
    that i seen.....
    i thought again...and came to tha conclusion
    that no matter whut happened tha night be 4
    today i wont be losin....
    today i wont be stuck in confusion..or be abused again.....
    by tha struggle that put me down....i aint losin again...
    "i guess you could say i woke up from tha depression...
    i guess you could say that i learned anotha lesson....
    i guess you could say that today i wont be stressin....
    cause today is tha gift and thats why we call it tha present...(get it?)"

    qoute that!!!!!!


    lovin tha piece p......onelove!!!
     
  4. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ladies and gentleman, LURK.
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Kisses x-x-x, Mzblkangel!
     
  6. Hiclass_female

    Hiclass_female Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lovin your work
    Keep it coming!
     
  7. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you readers, I am so appreciative of the love you've shown.
     
  8. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awake...Awake...

    I hear you calling to this hysterically blind
    and sleeping race...

    Very needed message...
    Great work!
     
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    Fully awake!!

    Peace piece.
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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