Black Poetry : days end

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by redlady, May 20, 2003.

  1. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    at the end of the day
    when you are loving me
    your gentle smile shows a shyness
    i am surprised
    that such tenderness can still be possessed
    by a man

    you tell me it's okay to love
    you tell me it's okay to trust
    you tell me it's okay to hurt

    you have patience for me
    knowing i am a woman with issues
    you know...one of those
    who reads something into
    every little thing
    analyzing and shifting
    making sure it doesn't happen to me

    you tell me it's okay to love
    you tell me it's okay to trust
    you tell me it's okay to hurt

    what is this thing that binds us
    our bond instant, the moment we said hello
    we had an understanding
    an understanding that reached past layers
    and i open like a flower a little each day

    you tell me it's okay to love
    you tell me it's okay to trust
    you help me wipe away the hurt

    at the end of the day
    when you are loving me
    and your gentle smile shows a shyness
    i am still surprised that you are here
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm diggin' this, Redlady!
    can't be mad at love
    and understanding.
    Peace to ya!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    when the love is in bond
    all facts remain
    the shyness of one's beings
    is a rapture of feelings
    yes it's o'k to love
    yes it's o'k to trust
    and it's o'k to hurt
    only to have the pain comforted

    it's still a few good men left !

    this was an awesome read Redlady
     
  4. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    skrybe-thank you for getting into what i'm sayin'
    rich - yeah, it's true there's still a few good ones
     
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