Black Poetry : daydreaming

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  1. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    when i walk in the door
    seeing tans and browns
    wooden floors
    cream colored curtains
    a calmness washes over me
    i smell scented candles
    i kick off my shoes and feel
    the bounce in my carpet
    under my bare feet

    it makes me think of faeries
    little wings flitting to and fro
    dots of light
    bouncing all around my home
    a glow of goodness
    safety freedom
    but also of mischievousness
    strength and everlasting security

    got this thing for faeries and bunnies
    the bunnies are easy
    they bounce around my home
    little fur kids with their own way
    of doing things, and now I’m seeing
    faeries with wings
    just day dreaming i guess
    but it feels so good to be home
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Nice, sweetie...very nice.

    Some dream of faeries and bunnies...and others dream of uhhh ruhhhhh....forget that thought. :D

    :thanks: for sharing

    :toast:
     
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    nice flow
     
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    the security of home often gets us through the rough edges. enjoy your peace.

    let the river flow.
     
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    Red~

    Aint nuthin like home ma... hol it down!

    Reas
     
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