Black Poetry : Daydreaming You

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  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My mantra of love has
    been to flow with passion
    in my heart and sincerity
    in my soul for you and only
    you; holding you in the flesh
    and not in my mind's eye

    To touch your senses in
    ways I've only believed
    to be true; but surely with
    pleasurable urgency since
    our time together is ecstasy
    well spent; even if this is
    indeed a hopeless
    romantic's
    fallacy

    Eventually
    my spirit grows…

    I smile as the maturity of my
    ripened soul
    becomes fully aware of its
    anticipated need to

    want
    &
    desire a singular love;
    one that reveals my personal
    Kama Sutra
    imaginations

    Each tender kiss is like
    a warm sea breeze that blows
    softly in concert with my heart;
    chiming your name with the
    crystal teardrops I shed because
    of my need to hold you close

    My nature sings as I vibe my
    love speech meant
    E~X~C~L~U~S~I~V~E~L~Y
    for you

    Mirroring the artistry of
    your alluring synchrony,
    I become the seducer of
    your mental; the explicator
    of why your heart burns for
    the love you adoringly give
    to me; although unknown

    My memories past rival your
    future's present when I visualize
    the joyful renditions of epic love
    storied fantasies I house in every
    corner of my mind

    Meditating as I watch the
    sure movements of you,
    my conjectured lover,
    at play

    I wonder
    &
    I hope

    that in the end,

    you'll be there when I awaken
    from my daydream of you…

    ©GQINC2K2
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GeeQue.


    ...well ****! :D

    would i be too forward... if i said that you are
    the star in my daytime, night-time... for all time
    dreams? does dat sound familiar ? :D

    (i was just wonderin')

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
  3. MsBerry_98

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    May I second that "...well ****"?

    hmmmmmmmmmm (that's me sighing)

    You went there and back on this one. Hella tyte (as usual).
     
  4. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BlakGurl - Did you whisper that to me during all those YOU
    daydreams I have all the time??? :wink:

    MsB - All for you Queen!!! :)

    Thanks for the love!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
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    GQ ...... ya dreammin of da day has set da stage for nighttyme
    man dis be tyght flowin fo real
     
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    gq-man, this piece is bea.u.tee.ful, very well done. lovin' your word usage, as well.
     
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    love the mental snapshots man

    dssNY
     
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