Black Poetry : DayDreamin' {Explicit...Newbie}

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  1. PurpleMoons

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    Daydreamin' and I'm thinkin' of you
    Daydreamin' and I'm thinkin' of you
    Thinkin' of the ways to break you...
    Mutulate you...
    Cause I hate you...
    Wanna hurt you...
    Go beserk on you...,
    Knowing you should be banished,
    where the **** is my daughter's child support check?!
    I guess it's with the father she didn't get
    You wanna be drug-dealer
    You unworthy child giver
    I thank God that when I look in my daughter's face there is no trace of the *** that i laid down with
    let alone did my thang with
    wanna **** you up...
    shut you up...
    **** you out then flush you
    ****, you don't even deserve to breath
    Daydreamin' and I'm thinkin' of you
    Daydreamin' and I'm thinkin' of you


    Copyright © 2003, By Alyce
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dayyummmm! I hear ya loud and clear....can't relate, but it's hitting hard.
     
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    Thanks

    I'm just glad you can't relate, 'cause there are too many sistas out there relatin'! :D
     
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    i understand your plight...but don't spend all your time daydreaming 'bout what you could do to the one that got away. you may wake up to find that you've lost most of your life to a dream.

    THERE'S TOO MUCH HATE IN THAT PIECE TO FIND PEACE.

    welcome.
     
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    Feeling Your Anger

    Could'nt have said it better myself........ Diggin that all the way around:hot: Welcome PurpleMoon(?)...... Hold on girl.. It will get better .....
     
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    that was serious hun...get rid of the hate, it gets you nowhere fast...but i truly did enjoy reading it...keep on
     
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    Hush, breathhhhhhhhhhhhe sweetie. Now I too was so very hateful lately, and a destee member told me I should not spend my energy thinking negative. Its gonna be hard but bulid some positive, your daughter is your joy, at least do it for her. if I can do it anyone can. Peace sista.

    I'm just sayin...
     
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    :wave: Welcome to Destee's PurpleMoons

    Don't give him the satisfaction of making you bitter. With bitterness there can be no healing, no moving on. Kids are impressionable the bitterness can be transferred and affect them emotionally. They're the innocent party in a failed relationship and their happiness depends on us keeping them out of the cross fire. Continue to SHOUT IT OUT on paper. Trust... it does help and be assured in due time he will suffer in regrets.
    Madd sistahly love.

    feelin'it souldeep
    Coco
    :heart:
     
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    powerful impact
    boom from the cannon...

    let the paper/computer screen have it
    then release it
    it works for me
    wonderfully

    nice piece moons of purple hue
    peace
    khasm
     
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    Sorry for the ill vibe. Needed to vent. Actually dont spend to much time Daydreaming. I got another piece for ya . Thanks for the advice
     
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