Black Poetry : daydreamin and I'm thinkin of u....:)

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  1. triniti424

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    wow this guy is lucky as hell...lol
    for real doe
    the construction of your words
    is really something else...
    i used to think that i used words creatively
    but i think that i have met my match...naw
    lol...but your definately my equal
    peace
    khasm
     
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    lol yeah right big head :lol: u know i aint no match for the notorious khasm13 :) u just playin wit me u betta stop...and yeah my caramel teddy bear is lucky lol ...but not as lucky as i am :)
     
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    "curator of my calamity
    sponsor of my temporary insanity
    lovin my ecstatic glee
    that I could know someone like thee
    brings my soul into a steamy pot of sensuality"

    the wonders of love...and the fallout, thereof.:)............continue your quest for perfection in love, triniti...and let the river flow.
     
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    baller..

    yes i will and thank u for the love ;) :)
     
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    this set a very dreamy like state as the words flowed
    equally the way dreams of all kinds unfold, with endless creativity
    back and forth to levels unprepared for / building upon a desire
    in the sub-conscious and bringing it forward to be reckoned with

    in this case..........it's as Khas put it some very luck guy.....hmmm
    who could he be?:angel1:

    Seriously though, I loved it!:D
     
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    lol...thanks Angelic you were right its a dream...but thats all it is gurl...lol I'm still that single sista who knows more than she cares too lol :) ;) but I am blessed to have met someone that does make me know what a nubian king is...and regardless of what may or may not...I am blessed to have known him :)

    u and Khas are hilarious yall got me crackin up ova here :)

    lol...but until some brotha decides he wants to settle for a sista wit too much thigh, hip high chairs, hair that he could drown in and a thing for poetic sincerity than...I can dream cant I lol :)

    and I love ya for makin me smile lol :)
     
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    this is a wonderful
    caught in the vision
    very nice
    Peace
     
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    "your existence
    is the persistence
    of love in this sick society
    nubian prince in your entirety"

    That line stood out for me. Great write.
     
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    blue...yes my sista i have been blessed to have befriended a brotha who gives my heart hope...:) I love the vision too lol :)

    Virgil...of course the line stood out to you my brotha... royalty recognizes royalty :)
     
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