Black Poetry : daydreamed...

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  1. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...i sit with my keyboard in lap and peck out this december piece...
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    today...
    i daydreamed...
    because your voice was so
    clear...
    like a warm whisper in
    my ear

    every phrase
    your lips
    released
    blanketed my spirit
    and cocooned my
    soul...the essence of
    what we shared
    released itself
    from the cocoon...
    emerging as a butterfly
    in shades of orange...

    i opened my eyes
    to my reality
    finding you
    embracing my
    carmel~brown...
    looking into my eyes
    ...of your future
    desiring to taste
    my lips...
    speaking lullaby's
    of lasting love...

    yesterday...
    i daydreamed...
    because your voice was so
    clear...
    like a warm whisper in
    my ear

    MsDLite (c) 12.01
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Ms.DLite

    u still remembered!!! wow!! my love is forever....

    really this was beautiful of sweet memories
    of daydreammin':heart: ;)
     
  3. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MsD

    you've awakened me so sweetly, the "sleep" in my tear ducts has been washed away...

    Always, you bring life to my deepest emotions.

    thank you my sista!

    a
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you know...

    :)
     
  5. poeticdelight

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    beautiful work

    i enjoyed the read

    pd :)
     
  6. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks...

    ...for i enjoy the release of writing...

    to acknowledge my poetic friends...

    $R...night does not become day without the memories of yesterday
    A...you've taught me well...from afar...Madame Poetry
    b...(read my mind) you know my reality, my future
    p...humble thanks

    todays...yesterdays
     
  7. epiphany

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    Mz D..

    This poem brings to mind
    a song Aretha sang...Daydreaming

    "Daydreamin and I'm thinking of you"

    I like this here....do it myself sometimes...:D
    nicely done.

    Epiphany...:heart:
     
  8. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is a lovely poem. I enjoyed the read

    Madd Holiday Greetings :heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
  9. Mr marion

    Mr marion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This poem is rocksocking like you always bring it !... loved it.. so soft and clean and simple and real....
     
  10. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    appreciation...

    to you...

    e...
    c...
    and Mr m...


    for y'all i write~