Black Poetry : Daydream...

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  1. Angela22

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    Is a daydream but a dream one only sees during the day?

    Can it have a form?

    Can it visit at night?

    Can it take your breath away?


    Does a daydream have a name to call, save the one we already speak?

    Does it have a feel,

    That makes it all the more real?

    Can such a dream make you weak?


    Weak with feelings of uncertainty, which your daydream has now brought

    Because your daydream is far more than what you ever could have thought

    Someone special to the feelings, in which you are now caught

    A lesson in this world, but one not easily taught


    To be in love with a daydream doesn't at all sound fine

    But is it when your dream is beyond the borders of your mind?

    A living, breathing dream I could only dream to have to myself

    Because beyond such a dream, he belongs to someone else...
     
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    Sea water deep poetess, beautiful write Angela22.
     
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    Thank you so much, Clyde. I love that word; "Poetess". So pretty. :em3900:
     
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    Well, you are definitely a proven wordsmith too :)
     
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    Angela, such a beautiful thought put into words.....

    Sometimes my daydreams come true at other times throughout the day. So that's why its so important to Daydream. Who knows
    when they might just come true.

    Continue your dreams Lady, because outside the borders of our minds are wonderful paths to follow!! :blush:
     
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    Thank you, butterfly#1! And very true, these visions of the day do indeed come true.
     
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