Black Poetry : DayDream

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  1. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Often I daydream about things
    things that steal my thought
    things that steal my time.
    What do I do when my every thought is centered on you?
    I feel lost in a daydream.
    I think of the sound of your voice as it cuts through the confusion of my mind
    and brings about stability in my otherwise upside down life
    I feel lost in a daydream.
    Your voice is a sweet melody of inspiration
    of encouragement
    of passion
    of devotion
    of desire
    of love everlasting.
    I feel lost in a daydream.
    I look around yet you are not here
    but the smell of your perfume is transporting me to a world of ecstasy
    I see you now when before you were not there
    I feel your touch when before there was just air.
    I look in your eyes and see a fire burning
    burning with the flame of passion
    with the heat of desire.
    I realize now that you are real as I feel you arms around me
    the scent of rose petals surround us as we embrace in a kiss that has no end.
    Your smooth brown skin glistens with the reflection of the moonlight
    while your smile is as radiant as the noonday sun.
    Suddenly as I prepare to take you I find you slipping away
    like a vapor that cannot be held
    how I long to hold you and keep you forever
    confessing my undying love for you
    knowing that my world revolves around you.
    What is it?
    What does it all mean?
    Then I realize I was lost in a daydream.
     
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    very nice Bishop

    :heart:
     
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    bishop! i loved this!

    this line... it made me say "oooo-weee"
    when we collaborate... Dayum!! :)

     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow..... this one was hiding on me tyte drop !
     
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    this was wonderful and something to think about
     
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    Who has awakened me from my daydream?
     
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    I had too and nice to see ya pen in action !
     
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    Wow Bishop,
    This is a really beautiful piece. I know a thing or two about those daydreams my self. Welcome back and please stay:)

    Good lookin' out $$RICH$$.
     
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    READING THIS PIECE WAS REALLY BEAUTIFUL WHEN I REACHED THE END I REALIZED THAT I WAS REALLY DAYDREAMING

    SWEETTEE29 MUCH MUCH LOVE
     
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