Black Poetry : daydream

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by wildflower7, Jun 8, 2001.

  1. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    he caught me in a stream
    of consciousness
    as i was drifting into
    a nice daydream
    he
    caught my attention
    just before i smiled
    our eyes met
    he looking through my windows
    trying to read
    the writing on my kitchen wall
    'just ask' i whispered
    -but i only have a statement
    'okay'
    -your beauty to me
    is captivating
    and i can concentrate no longer
    on my own life
    if you would please
    take leave of me
    i would forever be in your debt...
    'no
    rather i am going to devour you
    all of you in my flesh
    and lose you forever inside my soul
    satisfying both the urge and the need
    then you will owe me nothing'
    he found it hard
    but he went away
    forever
    into the blue of the day

    dream...
     
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    MzNappi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** **** ****

    i love to see the usage of every day life in poetry

    when you referred to the kitchen wall,
    that was hella clever

    only wildflowers grow anywhere!!!

    peaceNpoetics
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    bowing humbly

    i'm so glad you dug this flow...
    i didn't think many would embrace it
    i'm so glad that you did!!
    -7 :spinstar:
     
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