Black Poetry : daydream

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sittinng looking out the window
    all i see in this daydream is you and i
    the vision was clear
    looking out the window a tear drops across my face
    as the emtions runs deep
    as i see the vision of a dream coming true you
    torn down my walls
    had me feeling again and sharing
    my once inner thoughts i had long left behind
    sitting at this window as the day dream passes me by
    what a dream this once was with the love
    i found and thought would never vanish
    day dreaming is what i do best in a love
    affair as we once had
    (c) blkangel 2002:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very beautiful and well pose'd
    flow on poet !
     
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    lol yeah i know the feelin :)
     
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    thank you rich and triniti424
    for the read
     
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    This was good.... real tyte....
     
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    thank you for reading...Da1whoownslife
     
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    That was sweet!
     
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