Black Poetry : Daydream of You

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Within a daydream of you
    I can hear you calling out my name
    The yearning is at our door
    As the wind, take us
    Pass the horizon
    Inside the blue
    Deep in our world
    The moon gleams

    Purple hearts of love
    Cross the silvery skies
    Walking though black sands

    The feeling of you
    Is
    In
    My soul


    Within a daydream of you
    Heaven’s bliss comes alive
    And opens the door
    Tasting your passion
    Feeding of your essence
    Tracing my desire
    Consuming yours

    I can hear you calling my name
    In the middle of the night
    Your touch cross my being
    Occupying my soul
    Tears of joy rivers
    Within this daydream

    We touched weaving
    All in between becoming one
    You dancing in my mental
    As I thrist your love
    Take my heart
    Your my gold
    Within a daydream of you
    In smooth divine harmony

    The feeling of you
    Is
    In
    My soul


    (c) 2005
    Poetry by an Angel
    new Vision
     
  2. 1poetsought

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    A very beautiful daydream that is beyond words.
     
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    I would think you're walking on clouds ...these days
    wonderful piece, your style is tight
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dreammin by day light
    heart taking flyte to a maze
    where sweet hush lingers
    tappin at the soul
    i hear the calling
    in the night , my heart opens
    to recieve u
    through this daydream
    the mind floating
    endlessly
    one awesome write sis wow !
    yo pen on fire today .............
     
  5. geegee

    geegee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah...i love those kind of daydreams! Very nicely said poet!
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    That's just leftover love, baby. :D

    You can feel it in your daydream. Now, that's some good lovin'. :wink: :lol: :lol: :lol:

    :thanks: for your thoughts of me...I mean him. :D

    :toast:
     
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    I really liked this one
     
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    peace,

    what a beautiful vision u have............if I were to ponder on all of your scribes & positive comments on others, I would venture to say that the gold in this scribe here in my opinion is a reflection of you!!!!!!!!!

    peace love!!!!!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    1poetsought :luvv: thank you for the love...happy you enjoyed

    queentswana..heaven sent indeed...thanks

    $$RICH$$
    feel my thoughts
    as this daydream continues...
    thanks for the love and love the vibe u drop :blowkiss:

    geegee..thanks

    Monetary..behave...dang :lol: thanks for the love happy you enjoyed :luvv:

    SwtT thanks

    info-moetry.. my brother you are so sweet thank you for ALL the loving support you give a sister :blowkiss:

    Peace
    Angel
     
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