Black Poetry : Daydream - Afronet Files

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  1. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Often I daydream about things
    things that steal my thought
    things that steal my time.
    What do I do when my every thought is centered on you?
    I feel lost in a daydream.
    I think of the sound of your voice as it cuts through the confusion of my mind
    and brings about stability in my otherwise upside down life
    I feel lost in a daydream.
    Your voice is a sweet melody of inspiration
    of encouragement
    of passion
    of devotion
    of desire
    of love everlasting.
    I feel lost in a daydream.
    I look around yet you are not here
    but the smell of your perfume is transporting me to a world of ecstasy
    I see you now when before you were not there
    I feel your touch when before there was just air.
    I look in your eyes and see a fire burning
    burning with the flame of passion
    with the heat of desire.
    I realize now that you are real as I feel you arms around me
    the scent of rose petals surround us as we embrace in a kiss that has no end.
    Your smooth brown skin glistens with the reflection of the moonlight
    while your smile is as radiant as the noonday sun.
    Suddenly as I prepare to take you I find you slipping away
    like a vapor that cannot be held
    how I long to hold you and keep you forever
    confessing my undying love for you
    knowing that my world revolves around you.
    What is it?
    What does it all mean?
    Then I realize I was lost in a daydream.
     
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    He was daydreamin and thinkin of her!

    I don't see nothing wrong , with a man who loves so strong.
    I don't see nothing wrong, with a man who can feel such
    deep emotion. I don't see nothing wrong with ya daydreaming
    when it creates such a poem as this......as Aretha would say"He's the kind of guy that will say hey baby lets get away , lets go somewhere, where I don't care........" the kind of Guy that you give your everything and trust your heart whatever it brings, no matter how far.......Sing yo love song poet! And he was daydreamin and thinkin of her!:)
     
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    woooooweeeee!! bishop

    daydream nightdream but brutha ya doing
    yo thing extreme style:D
     
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    This.........

    .......is a beautiful poem bishop.

    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    This was a good read!!!!!!
     
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    Bishop,

    Nice flow. Some of the best lovers are dreamt:D

    Madd Sistahly Love:heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
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