Black Poetry : Day Dreaming

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  1. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Day Dreaming




    So far away, but yet so close.
    When I close my eyes I miss you the most
    Imprints of your body, a silhouette so clear
    A flawless memory keeps you near
    My craving for passion keeps me starvain
    Longing for you! Mind Constantly carving
    Pictures of perfection to fill my hole
    The taste of your love stains my soul
    Bitten by the luv bug, I must admit
    Cupids arrow's made a direct hit
    Floating thru the sky, Like A cloud at its peak
    A map to my destiny is what I keep
    Engraved in my emotions the way to my heart
    My eyes closing day dreaming is only a start

    By:
    LJ
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    now you know this was on point
    flow on tyte drop
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweet, sweet dreams to remember. This is such a wonderful poem , I hope she hears you loud and clear.
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thnks alll :grouphug:
     
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    :deal: hot piece lovin the way you placed a picture in my mind from a dream:wink:
     
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    Sounds like she has left an eternal imprint on your mind...this was vivid and sweet.
     
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    this is sooooo tight. I am diggin it.
     
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    Now this is a poerful flow
    very smooth, yet powerful
    a day dream is only a start
    wonderful drop
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    now ya know i loves this dream
    feeling you on this one
    tight drop indeed
     
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