Black Poetry : Day dreaming of U

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    All the wonderful things in the world
    Is what you bring in my life…..
    Upon the sunset.
    I lay my head
    on my pillow with
    sweet memories of you
    Cross my mind…
    as I meet you in my dream
    like an angel in the heavens rain
    floatin on a cloud
    made for you and I
    Everyday lovers find their way
    to share a dream or two
    hearts filled and getting
    high from the emotions
    lingering in the air….
    by candle light sitting
    by a cozy fire…with music
    turned down nice and slow
    you holding me tight..
    in a hush I love you
    is spoken from our lips
    see I don’t know if this is a poem
    but its thoughts of a dream
    that some how must come
    true….above the sky at night
    I look and pray for my dream of you
    To be beside me soon….
    where happiness is all around
    No more loneness
    No more pain
    of being apart…..
    just us two in a moment only
    we can share
    like an angel in the heavens rain
    this is the way it should be…​
     
  2. phenomenalwoman

    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i really like this, your words seem to just float like a dream. really pretty
     
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    this is a beautiful flow sis...loving the vibes
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    indeed the only way
    to hold it within deep
    as it caress every moment
    wow !
    tyte flowin here make me
    think
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    phenomenalwoman..thanks glad you likes

    Bluewater awww so happy you like

    $$RICH$$...indeed it do make ya think
    thanks for your reply

    Peace my family
    Angel
     
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    yes da daydream can carry ya mind into a wonder land of love
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$
    happy ya feelin this vibe.......


    It can take you as far as the
    imagination lets you
    Drift in a far off place
    Within the orbs
    Time stops
    And its only you and ur lover
    In heavens arms….
    chills drive you into thrills
    And comfort your desires
    as you yearn…
    Within a dream paradise…..
    It waits
    sweet memories
    Cross ur mind…
    like an angel in the heavens rain
    I lay my head
    on my pillow
    Shhhhh......
    don’t wake me….
    coming to the best part......
     
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    I agree with phenomenal, this was filled with such pretty images.
     
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