Black Poetry : Day Dreaming About You

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  1. vanneya

    vanneya Member MEMBER

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    Day Dreaming of You
    As I dream a day dream.
    It brings me back to you.
    The happy times we spend together,
    the patience ear so true.
    As I sit I am no longer sad,
    because I think of you,
    The moment partake the topic discuss
    the quite minute past.
    When I lay my head to rest
    after a night we share.
    I think of you a gentle man. . .
    with the protective air.
    And when I wake I have a smile,
    because the day is new,
    and now I have another day to
    think and dream of you.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!!

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to a new home u found
    welcome as u bless dis page
    grace of love as i welcome u from flyte
    dis flow of dreams is tyteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!:heart:
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As you dream of me
    I dream of you
    two
    of us
    enjoying
    the blessings
    of true love
    that can only come from above
    you and I
    kissing each other's soul
    in our dreams
    looking forward
    to waking up
    so the dream will become reality...


    hope you don't mind me vibing off your flow....this is a tight piece...
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow!!

    Welcome 2 Destees!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feelin' this daydream!
     
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    Smooth...
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WELCOME INDEED NICE TO HAVE YOU!!!!


    I like your vibe it's so unique, I loved this I look forward to hearing more from you...
     
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    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    loved the way you put this down. please come and bring us more!
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very Nice flow.
     
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