Quiet Poetry Lounge : DAY DREAM!!!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by beautifulblkw, May 2, 2008.

  1. beautifulblkw

    beautifulblkw Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In my mind…….. I see you everyday
    In my mind…….. You make me feel that special way
    In my mind…….. You do nothing but love me
    In my mind…….. You kiss and hug me
    In my mind…….. I constantly miss you
    In my mind…….. I constantly kiss you
    In my mind…….. We are one
    In my mind…….. Are life has just begun
    In my mind…….. You rub my feet
    In my mind…….. I watch you sleep
    In my mind…….. We’re in so deep
    In my mind…….. You are my man
    In my mind…….. You always understand
    In my mind…….. You caress my face
    In my mind…….. You touch me in just the right place
    In my mind…….. I am brave
    In my mind…….. I am what you crave
    In my mind…….. All this is true
    In my mind…….. If I could just say this to you


     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    And
    In my mind ......I know u care
    In my mind ......you love is rare
    In my mind ......envision a dream come true
    In my mind.......our souls can bare
    In my mind.......I see your smile
    In my mind.......yo warmth worth da while
    In my mind.......daydreaming of u
    In my mind.......lay things i wanna say that's true

    Now in my mind this was so delightful and devine
    flow on flip the words and lines ..
     
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    In my mind ........the vision I see
    In my mind ........we seem to be
    In my mind ........two becomes one
    In my mind ........our work is yet to be done
    In my mind ........you are my air
    In My mind ........You always care
    In my mind ........cant breath with you
    In my mind ........all of this is true
     
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    In my mind.....through eyes i see
    In my mind.....a love so sweet
    In my mind.....the grace of we
    In my mind.....hearts of one
    In my mind.....work to be done
    In my mind.....your one of a kind
    In my mind.....strong lovely & devine
    In my mind.....how your smile just shine
    In my mind.....how we move in time
    In my mind.....i know we will be just fine
     
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    In my mind.....I see through your eyes
    In my mind.....we can reach da sky
    In my mind.....you are genital & pure
    In my mind.....your strong & secure
    In my mind.....your da king of kings
    In my mind.....I'm getting weak in da knees
    In my mind.....your embrace so sweet
    In my mind.....you knock me off my feet
    In my mind.....we stand tall
    In my mind.....this is what he wrote
    In my mind.....this is not a joke
    In my mind.....your the only kind
    In my mind.....love is blind
    In my mind.....we are on our way
    In my mind.....I'm ready to stay
     
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    In my mind........I feel a lover a Queen
    In my mind........great power and means
    In my mind........sweetest of all
    In my mind........under da beckon call
    In my mind........I want u to stay
    In my mind........feel my loyal of grace
    In my mind........you my sunshine
    In my mind........lay a story
    In my mind........a beauty & glory
    In my mind........I gotta have u
    In my mind........I want u boo
    In my mind........lord knows it true
    In my mind........we could be like glue
    In my mind........a new beginning
    In my mind........is u
     
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    Oh the beauty that thoughts can bring, sometimes even to realization. Lovely flows from you both.
     
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    Wow-this was great. This poem hit me right in the heart. Every word you wrote and more is how I've been feeling for the past few months. Thanks for sharing!!!
     
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