Black Poetry : daughter of wisdom

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  1. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Regal
    she
    daughter of wisdom
    words I rise from
    one knee
    and pull my lips from
    the palm of her hand
    from the pads on the
    tip of each finger
    recognition and salutation
    and wisdom pulls the
    ground from my feet
    to place my mind in the
    arch of heaven
    and she of ancient
    words like foundation
    speak a universe
    beyond the circle of events
    unraveled in the continuum
    warm fingers grasping
    time like minds above
    the sands of forever
    daughter of wisdom
    words and a will to make
    men see
     
  2. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Always diggin your style skrybe.
     
  3. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx, Cindy, Sista Steele!
    Much love to both ya'll!
     
  4. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well done scribe!

    This had an elegant and regal flow which entertwined so sweetly with the content, you can almost see the image here...nice, better than nice...OUTSTANDING!
     
  5. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte 4 real....

    nfinite
     
  6. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx msluciousb, j'hiah!
    Much love and respect to ya!
     
  7. LyrikalShe

    LyrikalShe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh, now this is SWEET! An ode to woman. About time!

    Serenity...
    She
     
  8. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx, LyrikalShe! An ode to "wise" woman...
    A universe of a difference. The more I strive
    to be right and a good man, the more clear
    it becomes...
    Peace and blessings
     
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