Black Poetry : Dat nite in May...

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It was a nice day in May…
    Don’t rememeber the date..
    But I rememeber the mate…
    It was half pass 8 when he got there..

    I opened the door..
    Lawd behold my night in shiny armour..
    Reached in and hug me and then kissed me.
    All he could do was hold me so close..
    Played in my hair and adore me…
    Told me had a smile so bright
    That I light his heart…

    He pulled away for a shower and shave…
    I waited finally he was done..
    Told me I would never be alone
    He would be there…I smiled he pick
    Me up and carried me to the chair..

    Started with my knee work his way up
    Kissing each part of me
    until he got to my lips..
    Looked me in the eye…
    told me how perfect we were.
    And all night bash
    Began…me dressed in purple and black
    split up my leg..with trim of lace
    Him in boxers an a t-shirt..
    Lookin good enough to eat..
    He grab my hand
    Lead me to the bed…
    Took me close and laid me back kissing
    And caressing..got me thinking wooo..
    Got hot up in there..next thing I knew..
    His hands where in mind..
    Eyes closed…a passionate came..
    And released a power in da room..
    Had me faint..him hummin..
    Midnight madness fall from da air…
    Heart skip a beat..and a exhale began..
    He was there and here..magcial hands
    Mystical tongue…mystic vibes…
    Emotions flowin..the motion of
    Notion was set…dippin all in my groove
    As we meet in da middle each time…
    Relaxin in time..as I laid in his arms
    As we talk away..just to unfold and define the
    Night at hand….but I made a move..
    He was all over me again…till morning came..
    And all I did was try to go to the bathroom..lol

    We didn’t eat breakfeast..but we took a ride..
    He held my hand..even song a little tune..
    You know it…”I need a girl”wonder what he really meant..
    Was it all a game..
    Or just a dream…
    Or part of a perfect fantasy
    Made by two…then I woke up..
    Just a silly dream…wishing it was real…
    The part I like…when he called me his princess..
    Dayum he was good..but only in a dream..



    a taste of a blkangel thang.... :angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was very well written and pose'd really enjoyed
    this flow here sistah Queen
     
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    Hiclass_female Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I always enjoy reading your work. :spinn:
     
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    what a night.........nice post
     
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    richie rich...thanks your words mean alot...glad ya like it..kisses:angel1:

    Hiclass_female thanks fo da read..

    caramelpython..yes indeed but it was only a dream...
    but i love da visionthats for da read..dig dat..lol
     
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