Black Poetry : DAT BOI

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  1. Peachez~n~Rhyme

    Peachez~n~Rhyme Member MEMBER

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    Dat Boi
    so sensuous with his touch
    looking for love, never lust
    skin so smooth and fine
    but he’ll never be mine

    Dat boi
    Cool wit his walk
    and smooth wit his talk
    conversation initiated
    never imitated
    cheerleader
    prom dated

    DatBoi
    feeds my body with love and affection
    he’s like a virus,cursing me with and infection
    all i want is to be next to him
    caress him
    like coffee
    i feed off his every drop
    love so hot
    i can not stop

    Dat boi
    thug style
    wit flavor
    every word he says i savor
    like im his neighbor
    i beg for more and more
    till there's no more to give
    I feel like a deranged kid
    just trying to live
    but he wont let me

    Dat boi
    maybe if i get close enough
    i can feel his touch
    his sweet breath on the back of my neck
    Tongue licking till im wet
    as he holds me
    he molds me
    into something i never felt like
    like cat and mouse i chase him
    just to be next to him
    he’s my king
    to him i sing
    love is everlasting
    but this was a one way street
    cause our eye’s didn’t meet
    and greet each other
    i realized he’s my friend not my lover

    Be gentle yall this is my first poem i even put on here
    hope you like itDat Boi
    so sensuous with his touch
    looking for love, never lust
    skin so smooth and fine
    but he’ll never be mine

    Dat boi
    Cool wit his walk
    and smooth wit his talk
    conversation initiated
    never imitated
    cheerleader
    prom dated

    DatBoi
    feeds my body with love and affection
    he’s like a virus,cursing me with and infection
    all i want is to be next to him
    caress him
    like coffee
    i feed off his every drop
    love so hot
    i can not stop

    Dat boi
    thug style
    wit flavor
    every word he says i savor
    like im his neighbor
    i beg for more and more
    till there's no more to give
    I feel like a deranged kid
    just trying to live
    but he wont let me

    Dat boi
    maybe if i get close enough
    i can feel his touch
    his sweet breath on the back of my neck
    Tongue licking till im wet
    as he holds me
    he molds me
    into something i never felt like
    like cat and mouse i chase him
    just to be next to him
    he’s my king
    to him i sing
    love is everlasting
    but this was a one way street
    cause our eye’s didn’t meet
    and greet each other
    i realized he’s my friend not my lover
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    something bout dat boi !
    very nice piece welcome
    to destee.com poetic flowz
     
  3. Peachez~n~Rhyme

    Peachez~n~Rhyme Member MEMBER

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    Thankzzzzzz

    thanks for all the support
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome as it flowz
    happy u here upon us to share
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice drop, something most can relate to. Welcome to destee!!! Hope read more from you.