Black Poetry : daroc & KneticAesthetic

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  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Paradise...an island of things to come

    Daroc
    im takin as we speak
    pieces of ur mind..
    ur memory..
    ur thot..
    u
    pieces of u
    pieces are better than none
    for i would rather have some than none

    KneticAesthetic
    like mental sex on page
    keep it discreet.
    not on public display

    Daroc
    for wats "mine" aint for everyone to see
    this ish is preciously lovely but only for me
    as my mind evolves with time so wil the thot of u bein mine

    KneticAesthetic
    let it cultivate and marinate in our minds
    becomin divine
    like fine italian wine label vintage
    you and "mine"'s every words are label timeless in each sentence
    your beauty so truthful it would be a lie to even mention

    Daroc
    label vintage like our old age love.
    so pure..
    a product from above.
    mesmorized by ur talent.
    hidin deep drownin in ur thots.
    all that is within i wish were here

    my beauty not metion.. for i thrive off u..
    ur mind wat it spits moistens my thots
    wit out energy like this.
    i wouldnt exist..
    in such a world full of pain and no bliss.
    this keeps me goin..
    til im gone.
    gone ..
    down... for u

    KneticAesthetic
    its true we rise with every exchange of embrace with true grace
    your heart like shoe strings i lace

    its truly u and yours truly that i pursue, forever discovering revelations anew

    Daroc
    my mind is tryin to decipher each stroke of ur pen.
    its so beautiful.
    its seems foreign
    unknown to me
    such beauty..
    im stuck in this
    not wantin to be free
    free from ur presence.
    ur grace.. u..

    KneticAesthetic
    like last night

    Daroc
    the night gets lonely sometimes.
    and all u need is an ear..
    a shouulder..
    someone to hold dear..
    mentally u were mine..
    u give me the thout that love still exits..
    and not to have no fear..
    that i will find happiness someday.
    and hopefull its near

    KneticAesthetic
    hope sprins eternal
    thats what our moments are like
    vast and mysterious as we both maybe our journies will forever be worth the hike
    i wanna dwell on the island u call solitude and help u rename it memory

    Daroc
    let my memories be linked ot urs.
    my mind be on top of urs.
    for i could manage on that island.
    if i had u...
    id survive and thrive off u.
    for u would pump my heart wit love to continue
    and give me air to breathe so i can be..
    true.. and remain with u

    KneticAesthetic
    and when our last breath can no longer sustain,
    may we call upon the most high to breath recessitate true destiny
    let our love remain

    Daroc
    and it shall.
    for in us is him.
    and our love will be everlasting..
    lastin for ever..
    amongst the clouds...
    i am.. on number 9.
    and for y..
    u r my reason​
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We all know that's reason enough to reside on cloud 9... heavenly bliss, awesome piece and thanks for taking me there too.
     
  3. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks...
    if yall wonderin.. KneticAesthetic is new on hur.. aint post nuttin yet.. he is one of my friends....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nice drop and indeed hot lovin found on cloud 9 whewwwwwwww!!!
    tell him to drop it so love can be toss his way as he give it
    come on in to be welcome
     
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    this is real right here...
    very nice collab...i hope to see more
    one love
    khasm
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes I am feeling the 2 of you keep droping the joints here.
    "welcome to our place KneticAesthetic"
     
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    feeling this scribe
    nice job u 2
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Tyte Scribe...Brotha2Brothas....One Love
     
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    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks everyone for the love.. this wasnt even planned... we was jus talkin and that happened.. but im glad yall like it.. and he gonna come holla at da fam prolly later today.... thankx fam for the love..
     
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    This was a great collab. The tempo of it, just flowed like mellow thoughts between the two of you.
     
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