Black Poetry : Darkness

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ephlat, May 9, 2005.

  1. ephlat

    ephlat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Darkness
    Silent
    Just the sound of breathing
    No movement
    Except fo the stream of tears flooding my face
    Yet you can't see them
    Darkness
    I'm screaming
    I'm shouting
    Yet you can't hear me
    I'm drowning in darkness
    No walls
    Nor halls
    Space never ending
    Yet I stand in one spot
    The spot of darkness
    If I step back
    I will enter the light
    But if I stand still
    I'll remain out of sight
    I love it
    I hate it
    Darkness
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deep drop and to think of darkness
    such beauty comes to mind yet fear
    hold a place nice flow
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Without darkness there can be no light.

    This work of yours is telling, keep it up!
     
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    The stillness, the void, I loved the way you described the feeling that darkness brings. Flow on poet.
     
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