Black Poetry : DARKNESS

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Deep black hole
    visioning nothing
    to hold on to
    to linger
    drunk from hidden
    laughter no light
    just dark emptness
    like a shell memory
    of blackness
    the sour sadness
    maze to grace thy
    heart drowning in
    autumn rain of
    depression u
    can't understand
    da feeling but reveal
    misery salty secretion
    of it all as it dreadfully
    hit in a execution in
    thy soul rejection
    play a dark musical
    mist holding thee
    in stain sorrow
    fighting back to thy
    faith & understanding
    yet held hostages
    allegedly beaten
    mentally i know
    i'm sane
    :thinking: :thinking: :thinking:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Understanding this more than you know....This flow was emotively posed and felt. The Lord has a way of guiding us through a storm. It's this knowledge that keeps me going at times, as i'm sure it has kept you going. Flow on brotha.
     
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    this roll deep my friend
    and it spoke to me...
    and a voice whispered
    in time of darkness call on him
    for he hears all cries and worries
    and will lead you out the dark
    call on him no matter the time
    he will walk with you to the light
    take it up in prayer
    very heavy peice and I could
    feel the darkness roll off
    thy pen.....
    within him you have the faith....
    Love you
    Angel
     
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    I've spent more time in that place than I care to admit. Much love and compassion for this, baby. :hearts2:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    humble thankz watz for feeling this something deep inside
    maybe the light will come on !

    u know Angel for i know my light is bright only if i can see it
    humble thankz sis coz the mask will uncover i may not be around
    to see it happen but it will .
     
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    gempis then u know where i stand and feel
    darkness covers but someday i will see light
    Thankz my sis.
     
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    when it uncovers i will breath again !
     
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    Where darkness exists light too can be found.

    Back to the top!

    Light 'em up $$RICH$$
     
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    hey 1poet thanks as the light come on bright
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    wow...one poet said what i was thinking as i read your piece
    out of darkness (the meditative state) comes the light..
    like the style ...
     
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