Quiet Poetry Lounge : Darkened By Your Essence

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  1. s-jerard

    s-jerard Member MEMBER

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    When I am still, thoughts of you fill my mind, so I try and stay busy.

    I read
    But there’s you
    I write
    But there’s you
    I work
    And there’s still you.

    So I accept my thoughts.

    And I wonder…If I had only…would I still be lonely…

    You were my sun, my moon, my stars.

    Now I’m eclipsed. Darkened by your essence. Shaded by your spirit.

    Becoming half the energy---half the being.

    Venus without Mars. Saturn without her rings.

    And as the stars whisper my loneliness through the sky,

    I wonder…If I had only…would I still be lonely…
     
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    beautiful, heart felt. loved it
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so sweet and beautifully posed
    if only ........I wonder would i still be lonely
     
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    s-jerard Member MEMBER

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    Thanks PurpleMoons and $$RICH$$ for the love and encouragemant...
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sensual, soft and sweet-

    1poetsought ~
     
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