Black Poetry : Dark Times

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  1. candeesweet

    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I now find myself
    Streaming my commands
    Come up now!
    I now finally
    Can control my conscientious behavior
    Curves I see going down lines
    Or is
    Someone else encryption on my soul?
    Once streamed
    Others have control of pulling this long
    Me thinking it's all about me
    Your name popping up contiously
    But your souls encryption
    Is no where to be found.
    Your one of a few
    Dedicated patronages
    Wanting to make commands
    And

    Some one stream line function
    Come to serve your way
    Explained to be not only you
    But

    My souls
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    number
    I haven't seen
    Even though my selfies are plentiful
    Just enjoy my canned personality
    formed by others technically.
    A simple command will bring me up
    Surprisingly so.
    Controlled by:
    Someone I don't even know.



     
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  2. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very deep Sister candeesweet
    Great question. Great flow and drop.

    I read it twice to fully grasp it's depth.
    I even had to read it how I might write the same in order to see aspects that were being missed in it's depth.

    Is someone else's encryption on our souls?

    Makes me pause for a moment, reflect a while and contemplate.
    Just how I allow others and give others power over me.

    Sometimes that power has to be relinquished, but often I find I have left it within the hands of someone too long, and they start abusing.
    What they thought they had.
     
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    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Interesting question and synopsis. I feel so delighted that we connected on a deeper realm! Always needed in life to continue, tht connection. Sometimes brings us back around for us to see how things happen as so.
     
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    Candeesweet, Your thoughts are a constant melody. Beautiful flow. Desert Storm

     
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    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm glad your feeling it too! Melody of life's ups and downs!
     
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    This was definitely a piece/peace to leave you:thinking:
    These last lines really cinched it for me I was like "Ooooooo okay!" lol Props to your sister!
     
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    Glad it took you there, a smile.
    Candeesweet
     
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