Black Poetry : Dark Star

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Sep 19, 2004.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    With Dark Star
    It's always been a date
    Picked her up at eight
    To make our great escape

    Holding hands,
    Closer than before
    Shut the bedroom door
    Lady gets her whore on

    Dark whole...
    Holla at me wild
    Spank her like a child
    Vowels that she cries out

    A far cry ~
    Loving her for sure
    Wrote the book of love
    Turns the page I'm on

    The best ever,
    Love story told
    Penned in belly roll
    Dark Star to the core

    On her mark start
    Takes you back to go
    To touch your very soul
    She's coming at you raw

    Dark Star...
    Better than the hype
    Love the way she types
    Keeps me in my write mind

    The End...


    Darryl Abdu Omari :peace:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2004
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dark star... I like that,
    this is a piece that rocks the boots :wink: I was feeling this poem, ...thanks
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Visitng the erotic flow of Dark Star, as the pen swipes the page. Creative flow poet.
     
  4. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    you be writing about dark star wonderfully,
    now where are you in that? :peace: :eeek: :rolling:
    im waiting for your mighty pen :wink:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice dark star indeed
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

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    now i likes this dark star huh? tight drop
     
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    Ah, I like this side of your prism, brothah. Keep illuminating the way. :star:
     
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    I'd like to thank the family of readers and send a special shout out to Dark Star :star:

    You know who you are ~
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Absolutely delicious, but then again I'm sure you already knew that!
     
  10. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is a favorite that I am pleased to have guardianship over.

    Thanks!
     
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