Black Poetry : DARK SOUL

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  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Coming from a place unknown by us
    Ancestors traveled in a dark ship hull
    Placed into bondage four hundred years they tolled
    To give what they could
    This was only life to their soul
    Dark souls can you see them
    Like the one possibly seen
    In a nightmare
    In reality
    In today’s open eyes dreams
    The essence gave us character
    The deepest part of our nature
    The soul was destined for some life.
    Then why rush to ever after.
    Does it count what you accomplish in this life?
    Does it matter?
    Is the reward worth waiting on?
    While you live in strife?
    Being a dark soul changes your emotional ties
    Dark souls mess up corrupt morals and leave trails
    Is the soul in the mind or body to be release last exhale?
    Does it create the makeup of the vessel in which it resides?
    Ready to continue somewhere
    In the heavens
    Or hell when you die.
    Without the soul there may not be thoughts and feeling
    Of how much you’re tormented in the life with misgivings
    Its complex unknowing what is really going on?
    But more than four hundred years have passed and the soul still lives on.














     
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    yes they do reside in all(old & new). Great scribe Brother.
     
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    Thank You Sister candeesweet

    Please share with me about dark souls?
    Is it someone doing highly unacceptable things?
    Is a dark soul a angry soul

     
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    The elements of life that are living in your "quiet zone" that show light eventually to lead one to appreciation of then (dark) and now (light).
     
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