Black Poetry : Dark Remembrances

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  1. Poetic Justice

    Poetic Justice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dark Remembrances
    Hush , Hush quiet the mind, sending tingling exasperations, blunt fluent intentions, silencing you with its passions.
    Crevices escape from home to scream and scatter, oblivious to the taunt you taught them to play.
    Play and war is the dark remembrance of today, tommorow and yesteryear, yesteryear with its dead expections challenging tommorows right to eclipse on the years pretty *** sorrow.
    Dark Remembrances complete me, evoke me to act with revenge to become.
    Becoming human, Becoming spirit, Becoming Real.
    Dark Remembrances enbracing Clear Visions, gives birth to estactic estasy.
    Close the dark door of remembrance, close the dark door of futility.
    Embrace the shine of day, feel the heat of life, realize the doom is only there to protect you from geniune happiness and to humble you with its tricks of lessons, lessons of life, hold me, caress me.
    Closet full of dark dreams, dark dreams make you scream, here comes the beauty and the color and the antie em, to make you feel safe, sleep, sleep, until you realize the dark remembrances of your mind sleeps within you only to awaken upon your happiest hour.

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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Facing one's bad experiences from the past; one's fear...which hinder you from enjoying the beauty of what can be.

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    Great Imagery!! so vivid, much felt by me
     
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    What a potent new voice!

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