Quiet Poetry Lounge : Dark Brilliance

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LadyBelle, Nov 16, 2008.

  1. LadyBelle

    LadyBelle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I want to read your mind written on the tablets of your heart.
    I want to write to your mind draped in the woven fabric of your dreams.
    I want to crave your thirst with the suckling of my soul.
    I want to satisfy your missing
    Quench your curiosity
    I want to pour myself and onto
    And
    Immerse you into my quintessence
    Until we are both enveloped in the blind alley of rapture.
    I want to wave goodbye to the hard times.
    Not willing to forget. But to embrace.
    I want to build a deeper guise of trust and honesty.
    Sooth your darkest fears,
    Through the years
    I want to crave a new existence of hope and joy.
    I want to make new what was once old.
    My love for you is so intense
    Stifling at times
    You
    I
    We
    Are two torn lovers looking at the brilliance ahead
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    It is there in da deepen of slumber
    upon da moments of time whereas
    the unconditional maze speak in waves
    as it harvest thy soul from da broken days
    unto a new shifter of jointment
    it is there where one can bath in da short river
    of love that awakens da spirits as it cascade
    da brilliance of two side by side
    cometh dayz of new wit keen eye
    i seeth upon da throne
    where one can pour self rapidly wit da beautiful oils

    This was a awesome write ya bout to make my pen get loose
    wit da passion it holds....wow continue ya pen talking in waves
     
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    LadyBelle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, yes, You were feeling my vibe. I enjoyed your reply. I wrote this poem with my husband. This is true love..
     
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    I can feel it and see that your love of him is grand and he of you ....
    i am enjoying your flow and happy you here to share these beautiful moment
    and apart of you with us happy you family now !!!
    Poeticly sprayed
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh, my lady belle....this was beautiful my friend...how I too want everything you describe and more....for some reason...I want to cry now.....
     
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    LadyBelle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Greetings Sweet Apple Pie, thank you so much. When my husband and I wrote this poem together I felt like crying too. We wanted to capture the nature of our love for one another. I am happy you enjoyed it.
     
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    LadyBelle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Check out my album and see my sweetie....we wrote, "Dark Brilliance" together. :em2200:
     
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    This a great flow. It is intense and beautiful.
    Dropping truth
    Loving what one is thinking
    This is deep satisfying love
    Great write
    Quenching moments.. wow
     
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    Hodee,
    Thank you so much. Dark Brilliance is one of my favoirtes capturing the essence of love......loving beyond expression, beyond conflicts, obstacles, and loving beyond love itself. I appreciate your words ....thanks poet.
     
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