Black Poetry : DaRebeL-Lution

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  1. Da Street Rebel

    Da Street Rebel Banned MEMBER

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    800 trillion years
    from today
    will commence
    I’m long gone
    you know
    as in past tense
    But today
    here
    I’m trying to
    make sense
    Out of this
    crazy world
    ladies and gents

    DaRebel-Lution
    can’t be podcast
    And when you see terror
    it won’t be arabs
    Save cash
    or so you thought
    but now
    you may spass
    This is not
    some file
    you can
    “save as”
    So move fast
    save the garbage
    for the trash

    DaRebel-Lution
    waits for NO man
    Your eye
    towards
    the sky
    is they plan
    While your brain
    is encrypted
    from self
    On dry land
    They put one
    over on you
    so you can’t see
    the over
    In
    under”stand

    Placated
    on assumptions
    Vacated
    no gumption
    The material matrix
    is nothing more
    than stuntin’
    Where need
    turns into
    more of wanting
    Color codes
    and bluffin’

    Mankind
    sucking on
    one gigantic pacifier
    Fall victim to prey
    to a thing
    called desire
    For gone
    to the thought
    that there’s
    nothing higher
    Working
    to the bone
    only death
    is how you
    retire

    The day
    the earth stands still
    feel the tremor
    And we all thought
    9-11 was a day
    to remember

    As the saying goes
    it has to get worse
    before
    it gets better
    Sorry
    it’s going to mean more
    then when it gets chilly
    and just
    grabbin’
    a sweater

    DaRebel-Lution
    won’t/can’t wait for you
    to put your socks on
    ***** come on
    It’s been too long
    And we are too strong

    To NOT

    be able

    to CHANGE

    This song

    As in same ole

    ©mmix
    D.Capo


    :hi:
     
  2. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    WHOODIE-HOO!



    :bowdown:
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The same ol song, is not the best song, but we're used to it, and we get comfortable with the same ol same. Time to learn a new tune. Speak scribe, speak!
     
  4. Tiana

    Tiana Active Member MEMBER

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    i had to read it couple times lol cuz im ADHD to hear my sister tell me lol but it was coo u do they do live recordings on this site? u shud
     
  5. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    smh lol cuz u are dummy


    Brotha I like the urgency on this piece. I have an old piece this made me think about I think imma rewrite or do another part of it because this one most def got the wheels of the mind revved up :read: :)
     
  6. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Window (lyrics to my new song)

    this is what they call elemental

    and fire is what it incorporates to be specific

    without getting into any more details

    you sir, are on it ; )
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very notable......speak on
     
  8. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :lol: @ reason for edit: Im an idiot :lol: heo naw :lol: now that just cracked me up :laugh:
     
  9. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    thank you all poets

    nobody will EVER understand what i say

    UNTIL THE DAY AFTER

    peace

    i appreciate the comments poets
     
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