Black Haiku : dare to be lost

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  1. Prizefighter16

    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Something i wrote for someone special...figured id share it wit yall

    I dare to be lost
    in the garden of ur grace
    in the depths of u

    surely I am safe
    Don’t, I have nothing to fear
    when wrapped in ur love

    Filled with ur essence
    consumed into ur passion
    dazed by ur scribing

    Mind circles beauty
    quality…u are this ideal
    In the form of life

    In the form of joy
    you have swindled a vibrance
    to excite in me

    new hope for a soul
    a gift sent from the heavens
    a prize on my road

    I dare to be lost
    in the gardens of ur grace
    in the depths of u
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    winner whole hearted
    prizefighter true love abids
    this was beautiful
     
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    thanks prize fighter for sharing...and sharing
    in this haiku forumn your haiku poem
    where you dare to be.......free
    i was inspired to add a haiku to your title:

    yes dare to be lost
    in the whirlwind of the heart
    the leaves freely fall
     
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    cant wait for the chance
    to steal into ur vision
    and consume passion :rain:

    storm clouds will drizzle
    against the rays of our sunshine.
    let love recreate

    our lives intertwined
    as one of our own nature
    to let the leaves fall.


    thanks Rich and deepy im a newbie at this still. (deepy, ur inspiration inspired this one...thanks for that too.)
     
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    Into each other
    loosing self in radiant
    hope as beauty falls

    My heart stain within
    yo essence of tomorrow
    as today now end

    Now bathing myself
    like fall covering soulful
    together like leaves
     
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